This is amazing for a sort of Star Trek/MLP crossover. It's extremley well done, considering this sort of fan fiction is relatively uncharted area. Vision: We get a VERY clear veiw of what's going on, and there is a pleasurable amount of detail. Origianality: 100%. That's all I have to say in this feild. Technique: Wonderful writing technique, as always. There are few grammatical errors (if any), and the main idea and plot are clear and concise. Impact: Now I have to go re-watch Star Trek and MLP to brush up on this sort of stuff!
OVERALL: Very nice work, everything is conveyed clearly.
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Vision: We get a VERY clear veiw of what's going on, and there is a pleasurable amount of detail.
Origianality: 100%. That's all I have to say in this feild.
Technique: Wonderful writing technique, as always. There are few grammatical errors (if any), and the main idea and plot are clear and concise.
Impact: Now I have to go re-watch Star Trek and MLP to brush up on this sort of stuff!
OVERALL: Very nice work, everything is conveyed clearly.